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>he delivered
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It's bretty gud, 5/5, though
>impaling someone to death for a free sample
I have no idea whether it's the full moon or her menstrual cycle that's driven her crazy but that bitch needs to get her priorites straight.
Alas I'm going to agree with both >>145080 and >>134059 here in that most of the scenes overstayed their welcome and dragged on for too long. The whole video follows a very classic movie-like approach introducing both the characters and the situation at hand, and builds them up slowly. I don't think you should've tortured yourself with 3 minutes worth of video for a gag that could've been much shorter.
That being said, you've got a great talent animating and it shows when Keine's seen swinging anon over the wall. As an idea, I'd have restructured the video like one of those CCTV camera footages you could find on sites like Liveleak for instance. Picture a camera filming the stand in a fixed position, with Anon walking in from the bottom of the screen. Just as he's casually seen strolling he slowly approaches the stand to check out what it's all about. However, just as he's seen suddenly turning his head a horned whore appears charging at him at lightning speed from the top of the screen, impales him then juggles into the other side of the wall. To serve as a conclusion, you'd have the footage from another camera at the other side of the wall filming a stand owned by another 2hu, only for Anon's flailing body to drop from the top of the screen and crash the entire stand. All of this action could very well fit into the span of 15~20 seconds and, given the format, the brevity would be justified. The videos here are meant to serve as an illustration of how these videos go, with the 2nd one being the best example even if it's too fast-paced.